Cheesius's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fell for Love]

Wow, this was your first flash? Nicely done.

Yes, it has problems, which you already recognized, but if this is your first flash I think you'll do well. Looking forward to seeing what else youc an come up with.

lonelyandbored responds:

Thanks alot dude. I really enjoyed your movie "egg" as well as your highly underrated short "Battle of the Balls".

[Mrs. Robinson]

heh, not bad

I'd say it looked like you got tired of animating it and found a quick way out. It would have worked better if (a) you used a proper explosion sound, and (b) your character was obviously walking while playing the guitar (so it would have been clear that he had stepped on a mine).

Also, I bet you didn't go to bed yet. I bet you're sitting there waiting to see if this passes submission.

WooleyWorld responds:

No I went to bed after watching some discovery? No he was just standing there. lol, minefield just came into mind. I don't know how to make good explosions. and yea I got tired on the last image.

And no I don't get tired of animating. Just being awake. . .

[Problemas sin violencia]

I can't understand it :(

I'm not going to rate it, but I am going to suggest if you are submitting a flash in spanish to a website with a mostly english-language audience, you should have some subtitles so the majority of the people on the site can understand it. And now I'll use google to translate this review into spanish. It looked ok? But I can't tell because I don't understand it.
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No voy a votar por éste, pero yo le voy a proponer, si usted está enviando un flash en español a un sitio web con una audiencia en su mayoría en idioma Inglés, usted debe tener algunos subtítulos para que la mayoría de la gente en el sitio pueden entender mismo. Y ahora voy a usar google para traducir al español esta revisión. Se veía bien? Pero no puedo decir porque yo no lo entiendo.

Art-Link responds:

I need to show the class this day in my school, I´ll upload the subtitles soon please don´t rate bad...

[K and Z Frame By Frame]

use a preloader

The opening logo played, then there was a 10 second pause where I thought the movie was over, and almost voted to blam it. Other than that, the animation happens very fast - a bit too fast I think - so you need to work on your timing... And the loop is very short. Other than that, it's entertaining, but I feel like you should have kept animating and making more frrames.

[Cats]

Allergies, I'd guess

judging by his nose... But maybe he's just terrified of them. Not a whole lot to this other than a dramatic EXTREME ZOOM. It's mildly entertaining

[Magma Speed Challenge 5]

voices are recorded TOO LOUD

Animation is not great, it's very slow and random, but the main complaint I have is some of the voices are SUPER LOUD AND CRACKLY, the way some trolls deliberately do their voices. Learn to make sure you're not overmodulating (not too close to the mic, and mic input volume is not too high) and you can use a program like Audacity (whcih is free) to normalize your volume levels so one voice is not DRAMATICALLY LOUDER THAN THE OTHERS.

[Orange You Glad...]

I liked it!

The voice work was great, the animation was good, my only suggestion would be that at the end, when the [SPOILER] violence happens, there should be some sound effects included. Other than that, it's fantastic.

[Leo & Satan II]

Well worth the wait!

When this was first put up, it must have had a glitch, it wouldn't play for me... I just checked today and OMG SO AWESOME. I laughed so hard, been waiting for this. Well worth the wait. 5/5, 10/10

[I Said NO]

Nicely done. One complaint.

My only issue with this is the quality of the sound on your mic, it's dreadful. I know you said you were getting a new mic tho, so that's awesome... But in the meantime, yeah, this was painful to listen to. Nicely done tho.

[Mom]

awwww

That's sweet. I gave it 4/5, it would have been 5/5 but the constant clicking you have to do to get to the next scene. Would have been better if it just played through. But man, that was very nice.

xxxrifrafxxx responds:

I tried to make it interactive lol. I'll keep that in mind tho, thnx!