Cheesius's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Matrices]

so hard to read the text

yes, it was random, and too annoying to try to read the text. You need to put some white outlines around your black letters so they can be read when they're shown over black colors :/

[Fly Through Love]

I liked it, but you made a classic noob error

Your replay button needs a large overlay in order to be clickable. It's difficult to click on the lines. Other than that, great job.

[Bobs Fight]

Too much white space

There's not much going on in the frame other than just at the right side, there's a huge unused empty area off to the side, I'm not sure why you made the characters so small and off to the side like that. It would help if there was more in the background, so maybe there's a building they're guarding or something (maybe it's a white building in a snowstorm?). Also the EARTHSHAKING FORCE of the blows, where the whole frame shakes like crazy, the effect is good, but you've overused it. If it happens on every single blow then it's just distracting.

XDarknessX2 responds:

Well here what happen i was animating and everything was looking well but for some reason when i added the Vcam it kinda of stretched i thought it was normal so i upload it and it dint look any different so i was a bit bum out about that. And i must agree with u that the fact i left alot of space empty. It was because bob when i made him sad i made him only walk haft way so i decided to make it look more on the side and i should have maybe put a background. also the earthshaking force is a bit distracting
but the point i was trying to show with it was that bob was pissed but maybe i could put it down a bit and make it the strongest on the end.

Anyway thank you so much for your review!

[Naruto ~Kokoro Odoru~]

Not great, bot bad, backgrounds would help

Especially at the beginning where the characters are running over a black featureless BG, but really in the whole animation overall - there REALLY needs to be something going on in the background. The only time where there is a background is when they're running at night and they're just silhouetted in front of stars, and that looks fine, but the rest of the animation really needs some backgrounds.

Tsumetai responds:

yes i know. i am already doing things in a different way for "~Blue Bird~", with backgrounds. i explained in the comment why there is no background-i couldn't figure out what to put.

[climb for flash]

The things you have to do

The things that Adobe makes you go through to get a free copy of flash! That's craaaaazy.

anyway, I enjoyed that, good job. Wish it was longer.

[Ship of Luna 3]

What on earth was the framerate? 3?

So slow... my god. Ok, constructive criticism.

Your video consisted entirely of moving little drawings of boats in squares around very slowly. It's boring. You could at least have cut the boats out of their little pictures, it looks terrible moving little rectangles around. The gorgeous photo backgrounds only served to make more obvious how terribly basic your boat drawings were.

And as I already mentioned, the framerate was SO LOW. The movie takes so long to run because each frame is like tic.... tic.... tic.... tic.... My guess is you made it and felt it was too fast, so you dropped the framerate. Well, now it's not only WAY TOO SLOW, it's also jerky because of the low framerate.

Constructive criticism over. This was awful.

[Horny the Clown]

Man, I rated it low too soon.

I thought it was just a very short loop, and it was only after I'd already given it a 2/5 that it started doing more (I literally thought I'd already seen the whole thing). Meh. Entertaining, tho.

KapKyle responds:

Thanks bud : D
Take it easy

[Thief: Rent's Due]

Well animated, but too long and slow.

First, too many play buttons. I hit play... then I hit play again. Then I start watching the cartoon. But it's not the cartoon, it's just your little logo intro thing, which is too long for a logo intro thing, seriously. I get it, you're proud of your kung fu kick there, and it IS well animated, but showing it twice, and the whole lead in thing - meh. Too much.

Then I REALLY start watching your movie, which is well done. I assume the voices come from the game? I've never played it.

My biggest complaint is that it's very long, and slow in places. Some of the fighting scenes - particularly where he ducks back to dodge a sword blow - are not convincing, that scene was a bit awkward and it took me a moment to understand what was happening. But again, the main thing is that I felt like you could have edited a couple of minutes out of it and it would have really helped the pacing a lot.... however, seeing that you spent 8 months on it, I can understand why you'd be unwilling to remove any of your hard work.

Maybe I'd enjoy it more if I played the game? I dunno. I'm giving it a 3/5, because it didn't suck, but was too long and not that interesting. And I'll similarly give it a 6/10 for the same reason.

Manfreak responds:

Perfectly reasonable review but a 6/10? Its a bit harsh I rekon. ah well. I may have to re-upload becuse the first 150 viewers got a big red messag saying STOLEN! which is probably where all my votes went XD

[TmsT's "Spy & Pyro"]

I love this cartoon.

It makes me laugh every time I watch it. It's fantastic, great job.

I see things on newgrounds never change - people giving away the joke at the end in their reviews. Meh. This is why I never read reviews before watching cartoons on here any more :/ Ruins the joke.

[How hell looks like ex476]

I can tell english is not your first language.

The animation is superb, very well done. The ending is kind of weak, I would have expected more to happen than just an alarm going on and on and on, maybe the cake was poison? Maybe a big guy comes in and removes the cake from you by reaching down the throat and yanking it back out? Eh. Anyway still, well animated.

A bit of a correcton, it should be "What hell looks like" not "how" in english. Also you misspelled "example" at the beginning of your toon, but I think that might be a typo since you spelled it right in your description.