Cheesius's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Bafroom Table]

Pretty good.

The pacing was good, the animation wasn't bad... The only weird part was when it says "A lego kit!" And there are waffles. I guess this is a joke about the "leggo my eggo" ad campaign? I dunno, just weird. It was pretty good tho.

Honestly the only reason I wrote a review is to tell you that when "thelordofcheese" said "Great concept that falls a bit short." he wasn't talking about the length of the animation, something that falls a bit short is something that is not good enough. It's a figure of speech.

Iznvm responds:

thanks for the review. and to clarify, the title of his review says "not long enough" which is one of the stupidest and most ignorant "criticisms" that the NG viewer community offers nowadays.

[Un-Named Flash]

It's great!

The voices are kind of crap, but you know that - it's Speakonia, what can you do? Well if you want I'd be willing to record some voices for you at some point. I don't know if I can do all the voices, but I'll give it a shot, anyway.

There was also one joke in there (the one with the guy who didn't want to come outside) that's pretty much exactly from a webcomic I read years ago, so that got a couple points knocked off, but other than that, not bad

HatGuy responds:

Yeah, I read it from a webcomic too. I just thought it would be funny.

[Mom]

awwww

That's sweet. I gave it 4/5, it would have been 5/5 but the constant clicking you have to do to get to the next scene. Would have been better if it just played through. But man, that was very nice.

xxxrifrafxxx responds:

I tried to make it interactive lol. I'll keep that in mind tho, thnx!

[Bobs Fight]

Too much white space

There's not much going on in the frame other than just at the right side, there's a huge unused empty area off to the side, I'm not sure why you made the characters so small and off to the side like that. It would help if there was more in the background, so maybe there's a building they're guarding or something (maybe it's a white building in a snowstorm?). Also the EARTHSHAKING FORCE of the blows, where the whole frame shakes like crazy, the effect is good, but you've overused it. If it happens on every single blow then it's just distracting.

XDarknessX2 responds:

Well here what happen i was animating and everything was looking well but for some reason when i added the Vcam it kinda of stretched i thought it was normal so i upload it and it dint look any different so i was a bit bum out about that. And i must agree with u that the fact i left alot of space empty. It was because bob when i made him sad i made him only walk haft way so i decided to make it look more on the side and i should have maybe put a background. also the earthshaking force is a bit distracting
but the point i was trying to show with it was that bob was pissed but maybe i could put it down a bit and make it the strongest on the end.

Anyway thank you so much for your review!

[Horny the Clown]

Man, I rated it low too soon.

I thought it was just a very short loop, and it was only after I'd already given it a 2/5 that it started doing more (I literally thought I'd already seen the whole thing). Meh. Entertaining, tho.

KapKyle responds:

Thanks bud : D
Take it easy

[Thief: Rent's Due]

Well animated, but too long and slow.

First, too many play buttons. I hit play... then I hit play again. Then I start watching the cartoon. But it's not the cartoon, it's just your little logo intro thing, which is too long for a logo intro thing, seriously. I get it, you're proud of your kung fu kick there, and it IS well animated, but showing it twice, and the whole lead in thing - meh. Too much.

Then I REALLY start watching your movie, which is well done. I assume the voices come from the game? I've never played it.

My biggest complaint is that it's very long, and slow in places. Some of the fighting scenes - particularly where he ducks back to dodge a sword blow - are not convincing, that scene was a bit awkward and it took me a moment to understand what was happening. But again, the main thing is that I felt like you could have edited a couple of minutes out of it and it would have really helped the pacing a lot.... however, seeing that you spent 8 months on it, I can understand why you'd be unwilling to remove any of your hard work.

Maybe I'd enjoy it more if I played the game? I dunno. I'm giving it a 3/5, because it didn't suck, but was too long and not that interesting. And I'll similarly give it a 6/10 for the same reason.

Manfreak responds:

Perfectly reasonable review but a 6/10? Its a bit harsh I rekon. ah well. I may have to re-upload becuse the first 150 viewers got a big red messag saying STOLEN! which is probably where all my votes went XD