Cheesius's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mobey the Mouse]

Nice! Add sound!

I think it's pretty good. It needs a bit of touching up here and there, and it needs music and sound. But it's very cool, keep it up!

[DAMN PANDA]

Nice! Now keep on adding to it!

I think you're doing a great job, I'd love to see this turned into a full-fledged music video for that song!

WADEMACHINE responds:

i will do that thanks again for the review

[Pencilmation #1]

Very very nice!

This thing rocks! Of course, it's reminiscent of the old Warner Brother's toons, with Daffy Duck getting redrawn by the animator, etc... But very well done. I enjoyed it tremendously!

I'mah go give it a five over yonder, too.

[Shroom Shroom Ep. 3]

Cute!

Very nice. I wanna see more like it! Mmmm.... Broccoli....

Dawkus responds:

Thanks! Never fear, as I'm working on the next episode!

[Fly Fight]

I don't give tens often. This earned a couple.

Very nice! Yes, the whole thing was very derivative of the airborne fight between Neo and Smith, but still, the whole thing was very well done, and very entertaining. All of my five are belong to this, I must say. Now I'm gonna have to go check out your other submissions.

[Im Sorry -_-]

The background was very pretty.

Overall, I thought the animation was decent. The background was gorgeous, and it was a well written thing. It was awkward in spots, the way it was read - It was clear that the person reading it was reading along with the words, particularly at the beginning. "I realize now I've.... done a lot of.... bad things to people." Overall, it's pretty good, but I think the narration/captions could have been redone.

[The End of Joe Camel]

More of slide-show than a cartoon

Still, the drawings were nice. There just didn't really seem to be much point to the story, though.

[Everything and Nothing]

You have taken on too much.

It's clear that you're not a very experienced flash designer yet, and I think you took on too much with this. You clearly want it to be an epic thing, but the poor quality of the graphics, the poorly written script, the poorly edited sounds -all of these detract from what appears to be at least an interesting concept. I think you should have spent more time honing your skills on shorts before jumping into something like this. Know your limitations.

Also, the "smiley-face" shape to the "spark" in his eye was just way too cheesy.

Ofir responds:

Thanks for the review! Next time I'll do better

[Nursery Rhymes: the truth]

It starts out not too bad...

It starts out fairly well - I actually expected it to be about the true origins of nursery rhymes, and so I was pleasantly suprised to see a complete spoof. The sound is good, and you seem to be decent at singing nursery rhymes, and the animation was decent... But I got bored around the middle of it, and found it to get more boring as time went on.

Not terrible, though, a good effort.