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[Captain Jack]

Nice!

I thoroughly enjoyed that. Good job!

[Last stick fight - PL]

"Nothing too new or interesting" fits

It's another stick figure fighting cartoon. Well done, reasonably, although it bothered me how the green dudes kept just vanishing after they were beat. Weird. But anyway - yeah. It's been done, a lot, and while this was well done, I've seen better.

So... Yeah. Nothing too new or interesting.

[Blue Block (CLAY)]

Knox is cool.

I love watching Knox animations. The problem I have with this one is that you're clearly just copying knox's style, right down to the simple clay people and random banter. It was reasonably well animated, go do some more original clay stuff.

[Hero ep1]

The credits were the best part

The whole thing was relatively well done, and all... But it was way short. It needed to go somewhere else before ending.

And why on earth did you pick the Happy Tree Friends theme? omg.

Anyway, my last and final question has to do with your comments, which are as follows:

"my first official Hero movie... yaay front page! thankyou everybody!"

Ummmmmmmm yeah. The only problem I ahve with this is that it's not ON the front page. So what's up with that? Are you just being ready because you know for certain this will make it to the front page? Did you bribe someone? What's up with that?

Anyway, yeah. Good job.

chrome-shadow responds:

yer it was on the front page, when u go to the front page, to the left it says "latest 5 submissions" and im there lol i never said it was chosen to be there heh

[Hyperboy: Episode 2]

Nice. But you're right - I had to read the comic

It didn't make much sense until I read the comic. Then I understood, this was just the continuation of the series.

Ok - First - Your comic. Started out kinda crappy. I mean, it was sketchy, and didn't really have a concrete plot. But if I understand correctly, you were 14. Ok.

By issue 100 of the comic, you really had the art thing down. You started doing more color toons, and then finally you started going with full-page color toons.

By the end of the comic, your artwork had finally come into its own, and the comic had a discernable, followable plot. Not only that - the action was well played. If I was reading this a day at a time, it would really have annoyed me not to have the next day's comic, I gotta say that.

The comic kicks a fair amount of ass by the end. Fantastic.

Then comes the cartoon. I have to admit, I watched "Geometry and You" - Then episode one... Got confused and felt lost... So I watched episode 2. Now I understand who the characters are, cool.

I hope your flash skills advance the way your drawing skills did - because you've got serious potential. If you could make the artwork in your cartoon look like it did at the end of the comic series - holy crap, you'd be unstoppable. That, and you guys need better microphones, or at least to position the mics a little farther away.

But seriously - good work. Looking forward to #3.

[Bunnykill]

Very nice.

That was extremely well done. Good job with that.

The only thing that would have made it better would have been an ending of some sort - instead of him just walking away, the bunny should have freed another bunny held prisoner, or gotten something. It was superb, don't get me wrong, this is the one flaw in an otherwise perfect cartoon.

Frankly, I think it would have been funny if the bunny took the other bunny's wallet at the end, and walked back the way it came, counting money. You could have done that in sillhouette, with credits or something rolling over it as the bunny goes by all the carnage, counting money. I dunno.

But yeah, that was excellent. Good job.